Poetry, short stories, and other such creative endeavours.
the first stanza has some powerful images.
Thanks, yes I think they're stronger than the rest of the poem. I'll probably write more like this!
Beautiful. As a little boy I used to play in the park and used to love the boating lake with hand paddled boats - are they still there?
the first stanza has some powerful images.
ReplyDeleteThanks, yes I think they're stronger than the rest of the poem. I'll probably write more like this!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. As a little boy I used to play in the park and used to love the boating lake with hand paddled boats - are they still there?
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